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Very good art, but the actual animation part could use some work. Maybe one or two inbetweens between poses could make it move more smoothly. Also, the lip-sync is kind of out of sync, like it looks like its lagging behind the audio a bit. I also feel like the mouth shapes are too extreme with too few inbetweens for them to flow smoothly from one shape to another. Other than that, good job!

Incredible! Great job on everything!

Twin-Tales responds:

Thanks man!

The story is a bit hard to follow, but it's still pretty cool to watch. Good job!

Good job on the animation!

It's alright. It looks kind of bright for a rain/thunder storm. I think if you made it darker and maybe added some clouds in the back, that would help.

Arthur-Muvhali responds:

i will keep that in mind next n thank you for the advice

The animation is okay, but the anti-aliasing on the characters makes it look pretty ugly. The second guy's mouth doesn't follow the movement of his head which was kind of bad. I'm rating it 3 stars because the joke was pretty funny.

raNDumb80six responds:

yeah, aa is rough, i, however, use a hacked toonboom studio 8 so i need to tweak some settings i think. i would have put more effort in but i just thought it was a good joke n just wanted to share as soon as i could.i work at ups, n work with dimwitted people. glad it made ya laugh



2020 update: if anyone hasnt got the joke by now... its an "Isis"joke :p

I really liked it. The visual style was fitting, and the dialogue was pretty funny as well. Great job!

WeirdOwl responds:

Thanks dude! Yeah, not trying to do anything complicated with these, just tell some silly jokes.

Aspiring artist and storyteller.

Noah Smith @NoahSmyth

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