I give it three and a half audio jungles out of five.
I give it three and a half audio jungles out of five.
thanks for the feedback
I guess the art was alright, but I'm confused regarding what the animation was actually about.
Cheers :) Have been trying to make more structured stuff. So will for sure focus on that more. Thanks for the comment :)
The sound design is a bit off. Some sfx are slightly out of sync, and some actions should have sfx but don't. The animation was pretty good for the most part, though I'd suggest practicing walk-cycles as well as the 12 principles of animation. I'm not a huge fan of the hollow heads or the aspect ratio, but that's really just a personal preference. All in all, not bad, especially for a first entry!
Thank you very much i am working on a 12 frame walk and run cycle to give it a more 30fps feeling and look clarity is important and so is the feedback i recieve and i take it all into consideration so thank you for your kind rating ive been a newgrounds fan since early 2000s and actually the site that got me into animation in the first place
Hilarious. Nice background art, as well.
thank you <3
I love these so much
Thank you I'm glad you like it :) New episodes every Friday.
Great job! The animation was very fluid!
Thanks!
Incredible! Great job on everything!
Thanks man!
It's alright. It looks kind of bright for a rain/thunder storm. I think if you made it darker and maybe added some clouds in the back, that would help.
i will keep that in mind next n thank you for the advice
The animation is okay, but the anti-aliasing on the characters makes it look pretty ugly. The second guy's mouth doesn't follow the movement of his head which was kind of bad. I'm rating it 3 stars because the joke was pretty funny.
yeah, aa is rough, i, however, use a hacked toonboom studio 8 so i need to tweak some settings i think. i would have put more effort in but i just thought it was a good joke n just wanted to share as soon as i could.i work at ups, n work with dimwitted people. glad it made ya laugh
2020 update: if anyone hasnt got the joke by now... its an "Isis"joke :p
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